Miss Farr was talking to her class when a sneaky bird flew in the window.
During Editing:
Miss Farr was
After Editing:
Miss Farr was chattering to her lovely, beautiful, delightful, noisy class when all of a sudden a sneaky, clumsy, brown sparrow flew in the window, right before their eyes!
*Based on a true story.
Zakira told me all about it.
ReplyDeleteGreat editing
ReplyDeleteWhat a naughty birdy.
ReplyDeleteBY:Hayley
Holy moly that sparrow was clumsy and flying where ever he wanted to go.
ReplyDeleteI hope the sparrow is alright now and having fun with with is family.
ReplyDeleteI bet Miss Farr got a big fright!
ReplyDeleteSame! LOL.
DeleteWOW! Miss Farr you had quit a shoock. That must have been creepy
ReplyDeleteThat must have hurted the sparrow a lot
ReplyDeleteWow Miss Farr that is scary
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool way of showing how to edit. And OMG IT MUST'VE BEEN A REAL FRIGHT !!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWell, D6 I can see that you are very good at editing and I can see that you used many interesting words to describe your lovely,noisy class and that sneaky, clumsy brown sparrow.
ReplyDeletepoor sparrowI feel so sad for it . mabe it was blind.
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