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Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts

Friday, 1 March 2013

BREAKING NEWS!!

Before Editing:
Miss Farr was talking to her class when a sneaky bird flew in the window.

During Editing:

Miss Farr was talking chattering to her lovely, beautiful, delightful, noisy class when all of a sudden sneaky, clumsy, brown bird sparrow flew in the window, right before their eyes.!

After Editing:
Miss Farr was chattering to her lovely, beautiful, delightful, noisy class when all of a sudden a sneaky, clumsy, brown sparrow flew in the window, right before their eyes!


*Based on a true story.